Monday, May 4, 2009

Pure Delight



Pulsating through her very being
Untamed, fervent, inexplicable…a feeling so strong,
Riveting is its course, unyielding to fluid;
Erupting in unison, the euphoric tremors.

Desires escalated, feverish fantasies reigned,
Emboldened by this new power, and exploring;
Lust and love osmosed into one,
Infusing each moment with warmth;
Gripping was the journey, and the union,
He is in her arms now, finally;
Taming, enticing, loving, espousing this man…pure delight!

(First attempt at poetry after six years. I have a major writer's block when it comes to expressing emotions through poetry. But anyways, here it is...)

Photo Courtesy http://adiberlin.deviantart.com/art/hidden-121232601

14 comments:

Amal Bose said...

first attempt?
its so beautiful..
wonderful job.

Satans Darling™ said...

Loved it! The Acrostic is Apt!

Ms.R. said...

Wow that was surely delightful to read. Subtle nuances et al. Nice work! You should write more poetry! :D

Little Girl Lost said...

for an occasional poet, that is a very commendable piece of work :) loved the wild feel of it ... hope to read more poems from you...

Crowscious said...

Very good. I wouldn't mind havin a certain guy in my arms that way! Sigh. Anyways have to write med june end. After that, hopefully, freedom. :)

Arv said...

and you say 6 years?????

well gal, you certainly have not lost anything as far as I can tell...

this one rocks :)

take care... cheers...

AD said...

waa waa wooooooooooooooom!

Quirky Mon said...

@ Amal
Not exactly. First attempt in six years. Glad you liked it :)

Quirky Mon said...

@ Ashrita
Your "confinement" poem was the inspiration :)

Quirky Mon said...

@ Ms.R
Coming from you, it's a huge compliment. I love your posts...and the fact that you liked my poem is a big deal for me :) thankyouuuuuuuu :)

Quirky Mon said...

@ Little girl lost
Thanks for your comment. I'd surely try to write more poems :)

Quirky Mon said...

@ crow
So, both of us would start internship around the same time :)

Quirky Mon said...

@ Arv
aaaw...Thanks Arv :)

Quirky Mon said...

@ Seher
Thank you :)